The City

So I've actually kind of been working on this audition thing for Sovereign City. I know.

I don't know if anyone really reads this blog, but if you do I actually would like some feedback on this:

I actually have no idea what I'm doing with this style, but I'm enjoying it a lot. But is it confusing or eye-rape-ish? Does it offend? I'd like to do the whole tournament in this style, should I get in. Only hopefully better. You know.

(I'm holding off putting this on DA for now cuz I'm not sure if I'm totally done with it, lawlawlawl)

This'll be her ref pic. Still struggling with the colors. It's tough cuz, like, I'm not even gonna be using her colors, hahaha.

Again, if you're out there, what do you think? I hesitate to give her really bright colors, cuz then she looks less hoboish, but to much grey gets boring. I like a cool color scheme cuz it should make her look like a weakling. c:

Also that ratfaced guy is gonna be in it, as well. Be tee dubs.

Look, here they are together:

Wanted to see how they'd look together in black and white, also figured I should decide how tall they are. Slug's pretty average, Rat's kind of short.

His name is probably going to stay Ratfaced, because it just emphasizes how much he fails at english grammar (even though he actually isn't the one who came up with the name). He's a self-taught ninja and also smelly semi-literate immigrant. c:

Neither of them have superpowers. GOOOOO TEAM HANDICAP.

These are older doodles, but I actually have no decent Rats on the computer. :/ It's mostly right, just his costume's changed.

Rat is kind of a smartass, kind of a flit, kind of a cynic, kind of a goof, and a really bad teammate who will probably be abandoning Slug whenever the going gets tough. He had the Slug devotion once, but he sure doesn't anymore.

Hopefully there'll be a lot more of these two. Cuz I don't have a clue what to do with them outside of this tournament, hahahaha.